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Monday Memo: Got Local News?
Guard It.

| October 12, 2020

By Holland Cooke


BLOCK ISLAND, RI — Example: Actual copy, a story about a love triangle shooting:

  • Here’s what listeners heard – read this aloud: “The woman’s husband arrested the wounded man taken to the hospital.”
  • Here are the facts the writer obscured: Police arrested the woman’s husband, the accused shooter. The person he shot was hospitalized.
  • As-is, the ear was told something different when half-sentences ran-together. It sounded like the woman’s husband was a cop, who arrested someone who had been shot.

Verbs are our friends.

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